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Science FictionAn Idea I had for a feminist sci fi novel
Posted September 30, 2023 by [Deleted] in Books

A concept: in a world where a deadly alien virus secretly affects all men on the planet, but the process is so slow and gradual, no one realizes that an epidemic has even taken place until its too late.

Now 99% of all men have been completely zombified, reduced to walking-life-support systems for a sentient tumorous growth they keep tucked away between their hips. From here on out, they may seemingly act like their old selves, with no one aware that any change has taken place, but now, all these men care about is nourishing the needs of the parasite that's taken over their bodies/minds. And all the parasite cares about is reproducing- which can only be done if their host male knocks up a woman and she has a son- which will also be born as a life-support system for a new sentient alien zombie-worm which will remain dormant until puberty.

(For those of you who haven't picked up on it yet, this entire story premise is a metaphor for men's propensity for sexual violence as a class)

So basically zombified men's entire MO is to seduce women, and get them alone (upon which they reveal their true monstrous forms and force themselves on their stunned and freaked out hookups). The men then pretend the encounter never happened when confronted later, and begin pursuing new women to rape. No one will believe these women when they try and share what happened because let's be real, would YOU believe someone when they came forward and said "Your brother/father/uncle/neighbor/coworker is actually a zombie to an alien parasite controlling his every thought/action and he only pretends to be human in order to lure in victims?"

The protagonist of this story would be a woman who gets the shock of her life when the boyfriend she thought she vetted so carefully turns out to be a Host on the night of their engagement, and when she learns she's expecting a baby boy, she has to go on an adventure to try and end the pregnancy before she brings another monster into this world.

So what do you guys think? An interesting premise or too on-the-nose?

55 comments

pennygadgetNovember 27, 2022

"Belle! I'm a woman now! And if you don't join me in blissful lesbain matrimony, I shall inform the villagers that you are a TERF and have you thrown in the asylum with your kooky father!"

CailinNovember 27, 2022

Hahahahaha this is excellent 👏🏼

HalfMentalAlchemistNovember 27, 2022

And all the eggs he eats won't give him the ability to create life.

CailinNovember 27, 2022

Omg hahahahahahaha

sylviasmushroomsNovember 27, 2022(Edited November 27, 2022)

I hope this is a joke because he’s really hot. 😅

He’s the guy that transmaxers wish they were tbh. Like he clearly works out and he’s got a cut jawline and honestly ideal masculine features.

If he’s going for parody this is hilarious. If he’s serious it’s extremely depressing, but also still hilarious, because what bulking gym bro dedicates hours to working out and balancing his nutrition for maximum gains, and then feels distress at not being a dainty little girl?

clairenovakNovember 28, 2022

The one TIM I know was like this. Attractive, worked out, did triathlons, etc. Now he's a creepy TIM who thinks he's a "manic pixie dream girl."

pennygadgetNovember 28, 2022

I hope this is a joke because he’s really hot. 😅

That was my thought. 🤣

Dude could make a living as a model or by playing Gaston at Disney World. I want to believe he's trolling because it would be a shame if estrogen, surgery, and ugly makeup turned him into a hideous full time drag queen

MissBehavedNovember 28, 2022

Right? As a man he is downright handsome... as a woman? errrrrrrr well I guess he'd still be handsome

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

If he’s going for parody this is hilarious. If he’s serious it’s extremely depressing, but also still hilarious, because what bulking gym bro dedicates hours to working out and balancing his nutrition for maximum gains, and then feels distress at not being a dainty little girl?

Outstandingly funny!

DoubleAntandreNovember 28, 2022

"Gosh, it disturbs me to see you, Gaston..."

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

He puts the TIM in intimidating.

GenderHereticNovember 28, 2022

Repulsive.

Disappearanceoftheychromosomer( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)November 28, 2022

Every time an attractive man trans out is such a pity

SCP353November 27, 2022

He'll end up paying thousands and still look like a man in a wig then will blame TERFs on why he can't pass as a pretty princess.

[Deleted]November 27, 2022

That body shape 💀 at least stop lifting weights, like, pretend that you're actually TRYING to not have that appearance 😂

yesisaiditxxNovember 28, 2022

For some reason when I see dudes who are super into having big muscles I sorta assume there’s some kind of hidden issue with femininity that is possibly that they, like this guy, have a fetish for wanting to look attractive to other men, and the LIFTING HEAVY BRO is what they channel it into. I know that’s a lot of analyzing and sounds mean but I can’t help but see that in probably half of the python-armed men I’ve met.

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

Majority of men are homoerotic, they focus their positive feelings on other men and their sexual and violent feelings on women.

sylviasmushroomsNovember 27, 2022

He can’t help lifting weights for hours weekly any more than he can help his penis, bigot! 🤣

ItzpapalotlNovember 28, 2022

Ha! Funny as well because despite having plenty of women interested in him, Gaston repeatedly goes after Belle, who wants nothing to do with him...like gross AGP’s who obsessively hound lesbians...not that any women are interested in them 😂

WatcherattheGatesNovember 27, 2022

Truly, the first thing I saw was Gaston in a wig--then I saw the caption and saw a wit had beat me to it!

shewolfoffranceNovember 27, 2022

Head tilt needs work.

Committing_Tervery🧙‍♀️🐱🐈‍⬛November 27, 2022(Edited November 27, 2022)

Also missing a choker with a bell and cat ears. And where are his trans colored striped socks?

Edit: also needs his hair greasier to create the official TIM™ look.

shewolfoffranceNovember 27, 2022

Um, that's low-key incredibly offensive? His wig is obviously transgreasy.

CailinNovember 27, 2022

also needs his hair greasier to create the official TIM™ look.

Agreed, the greasy strings of hair are the TIM trademark.

Artistlee19November 28, 2022

Also something that indicates an obsession with anime, specifically the high school ones

BondiBlueNovember 27, 2022

Also missing a choker with a bell and cat ears.

Keffals finally hit the gym? I guess he got tired of being a hunchback, and sought to become Esmeralda and Hercules all at once. Bob Ogre -- er, Iger -- must be on the phone with casting directors as we speak.

And where are his trans colored striped socks?

Aw come on, you know where they are: They're in Justin Trudeau's drawer! 😂

MoralTerfitudeNovember 27, 2022(Edited November 27, 2022)

For there's no one in town half as manly,

Perfect, a pure paragon (and if you say otherwise you'll be banned and doxxed),

You can ask any Tom, Dick, or Stanley (but not any actual women because who cares what those terfs have to say?)

And they'll tell you whose side they prefer to be on.

SecondWaverNovember 27, 2022(Edited November 27, 2022)

Is this a joke? Or more likely yet another example of AGP men going the hypermasculine route to overcorrect for any feminine tendencies? There are a lot of AGPs in the military, this one seems into weightlifting…

Researcher1536November 27, 2022(Edited November 27, 2022)

Isn't there a TIM who posts or used to post on YT who was like male model good looking and totally buff. He went TIM, then detransitioned, then went back to TIM-status? He's Dutch or German or Swedish, I think.

SecondWaverNovember 28, 2022

Now I’m curious. If you find out, link it here.

LonelyKindredNovember 27, 2022

Why does that look like a Lara Croft cosplay

[Deleted]November 27, 2022

LMAO at the reworked Gaston song caption!

InattentiveGiraffeNovember 28, 2022

This. Is. Beautiful XD

TransWidowBuy my memoir!November 27, 2022

Re: all the comments that he's hot as a guy: in my experience, this occurs more often than you'd think. It may be that hyper testosterone levels (think Bruce Jenner) can be responsible for the kink that leads to the transing.

MissBehavedNovember 27, 2022(Edited November 28, 2022)

looks more like Gaston

edit: lmao i didn't notice, only just now saw the bottom commentary 😂

FeministunderyrbedNovember 27, 2022

I guess he didn’t feel like tucking.

[Deleted]November 27, 2022

bwhahahaha i am deceased

BondiBlueNovember 27, 2022

What was that song by Frank Sinatra, "and that's why the lady is a tramp"? Could do a remake as "...and that's why the 'beauty' is a BEAST."

LilOvariesNovember 28, 2022

He has that shark stare.

Cecilie2608November 27, 2022

Built like an absolute Chad!

Committing_Tervery🧙‍♀️🐱🐈‍⬛November 27, 2022

That’s a hilarious reply 😆

How am I doing right now?

You’re gross, dude, because you have AGP and are a misogynist. You ain’t well, that’s for sure 😒

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

Steals old tampons and pads? What even the fuck?

Crazy, as per usual.

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

There's a few stories of women discovering TIM rooms mates stealing their tampons from the trash.

yikesforeverNovember 27, 2022

The guy looks like a troll, but at the same time, there are legit TiMs like this, so.

TransWidowBuy my memoir!November 27, 2022

This dude looks quite a bit like one I knew when I was in that world with my ex.

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

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TheExorcistofLiesNovember 27, 2022

Just thinking that, good looking guy, unlike most of the Reddit transcels. It’s a waste but goes to show how a man’s looks have nothing to do with whether or not he’s a pornsick loser.

Researcher1536November 27, 2022

That was my first thought, too. This really shows how porn-addled these guys are. He's a really good looking, in shape guy. He could have had a lot of success dating (I'm going out on a not so long limb and saying his personality is utter shit and even his good looks didn't help him get any dates). But instead, points to picture

[Deleted]November 27, 2022

(I'm going out on a not so long limb and saying his personality is utter shit

So just like Gaston!

NibaizNovember 28, 2022

I guess the deal breaker for many was when he asked to wear women's underwear during sexy nights.

[Deleted]November 28, 2022

It's interesting too because most of those incel mass murderers have not been remotely ugly men. Physically, anyway. They tell each other that women won't go for them because they have small wrists or slightly downturned eyes or are of average height. When in the cases of these men it was their creeper personalities that were the problem.

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[Deleted]November 28, 2022

Good riddance, his outside will match his inside then. Violent incel, sick off the sissy porn.

yesisaiditxxNovember 28, 2022

I couldn’t find him but tried because he looks like someone I know lol