
Maybe I'm nitpicky, but she seems like she's 99% there. Now if she dropped "cishet", "asexual men"* and the other cult terms, it would be perfection.
-* I'm extremely weary of men who claim asexuality but even if they're completely legit, they're MEN. Don't take them out the equation, same goes for gay men. I'm not automatically against them but I'm sure as hell not automatically in favor of them because they're still men.
That's all that needs to be said, really.